Dialogue from the balloons--
Panel 1:
Eric: "Carol, why do you have such an odd smile on your face? You look like a woman possessed!"
Eric: "So... care to let me in on your private joke, darling?"
Carol (from out of frame): "HA HA HA!"
Eric: "It must be pretty damn amusing, the way you're acting, and--"
Eric: "-Hold on a moment... I'm *aughh*... I'm suddenly feeling kind of strange..."
Panel 2:
Eric: "W-What's... happening... to me--??"
Eric: "M-My body! It's..."
Panel 3:
Carol: "I spiked both of our drinks with a li'l surprise..."
Carol: "SEX-CHANGE PILLS!"
Carol: "*Giggle*"
Panel 4:
Eric (female): "EEEEK! Oh my god! Nooooo!!!"
Carol: "Wow! Those pills worked fast, haha!"
Carol: "-Of course, it helped that you gulped down your drink in one shot, as always, while I sipped mine..."
Carol: "I have to say it... you look fucking adorable like this, Eric!"
Carol: "-And so much easier to deal with now, with your muscles and size advantage gone!"
Carol: "Here, check yourself out in this mirror, while I fondle your soft, perky new girly titties!"
Carol: "I bet that none of the guys at work would ever guess it was really you..."
Carol: "...While trying their best to smooth talk you into letting them bang you!"
Carol: "Admit it, "Erica"..."
Carol: "Just between us girls..."
Carol: "This groping is getting you wet, isn't it?"
Carol: "-Just about ready for a nice big cock to slide deep and hard into your tight little virgin twat..."
Carol: "-And you just happen to be in luck, little lady! I can feel my pill taking effect!"
Carol: "Hell yes! I'm growing! Wooo!!!"
Carol: "My clit's becoming a penis!"
Carol: "Your lovin' girlfriend is about to "man up", darlin'!"
Carol: "So you'd better hold onto your bonnet, "Holly Hobby"! A train is about to pull into your station! Heh-heh!"
Panel 5:
Sound effects: "Knead!" ... "Grope!"
Carol (male): "Oops! Looks like my transformation destroyed my outfit!"
Carol (male): "I guess I got too big for my britches, hee-hee!"
Carol (male): "But I don't seem to be too big for you, my dear..."
Carol (male): "-Judging by your response, heh-heh!"
Eric (female): "I... I'm not *uhh* ready for this... I-I *moannn* can't be a girlll..."
Eric (female): "Ohhh, wait... touch me there... Oooooh!"
Eric (female): "It's sooo embarrassing and wrong, but, Ahhh..."
Eric (female): "*Squeal!* Aughnn..."
Carol (male): "That's my good girl!"
Eric (female): "M-Maybe this isn't so bad..."
Carol (male): "See? You're warming up to the situation, already!"
Eric (female): "W-We'll be changing back soon, right? ...RIGHT???"
Carol (male): "Well, babe, here's the thing..."
Carol (male): "Being big and strong and able to penetrate you is too awesome for words..."
Carol (male): "-And to see you all tiny and femmy and at my sexual mercy is just about the hottest thing ever, baby..."
Carol (male): "So I'm going to flush the remaining pills down the toilet!"
Eric (female): "*Gasp!* Oh no!"
Eric (female): "*Whimper*"
Carol (male): "I'm the man, now..."
Carol (male): "-And you're my subby li'l sissy bitch."
Carol (male): "Deal with it."
Carol (male): "Now I think I'll try to put a baby in you, my pretty princess. Bend over..."
I keep coming back to your blog. Your unique take on caption/stories, your focus on "what has been lost/changed", the reversal of situations along with the weak whimpering of your "victims" (which I wouldn't mind being part of) is masterfully done and delightful.
ReplyDeleteI notice most of your transformations are near-instantaneous. Is this a coincidence? Because I woud -love- to read a slightly longer one in your unique style. Perhaps with a secondary character commenting on every lost inch of height, strenght, manhood etc...
Anyway, amazing work, as always. Can't wait to read your next one (s).
@Unknown
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the very kind comments!
Actually, the near-instantaneous changes aren't really what I'd like to do with most of these at all... but are basically a necessity, given what I have to work with in this medium. This is due to the fact that I'll find a single picture (usually on Tumblr) that inspires a TG-TF scenario, but there's only that one picture to work from, unless I'm lucky and find a couple of unrelated pictures that somehow match (or that I can finesse in Photoshop to match up a little), as with "Grope-a-Dope Strategy". That's the big reason why there's so much dialogue packed into a single image, because I don't usually have further shots where I can spread the conversation around.
Of course, I could simply write it mainly in prose (as with "His Wish Is YOUR Command", "Wife Swapping" and "Devil to Pay"), but I'm very visually-oriented, and it's a lot more fun to present things primarily in that way, and confine most of the writing (on the surface) to spoken dialogue.
Now, what I'd actually like to do (and what I fantasize about happening to myself, and to others), is more along the lines of what you describe: gradual transformation, with detailed changes and reactions from both the TF victim and the human catalyst (and/or witnesses). Ultimately, I'd like to do this in CGI comics form, as is done at TGComics (and Stories) and at Deviant Art. I have some skills, but learning to use Blender and Daz 3D software is ridiculously complex for a novice like me, though I'm trying.
What I've learned from my many years writing TG RPs, short stories and drawing them, is that the visual aid, although *very* fun, doesn't need to be very complex to support the story.
ReplyDeleteThere are absolutely breathtaking artists like Kannel that put insane amount of work and talent in their art and stories, but there are also people like Ariadne, or even Mentalcrash (in some regards) who's artistic abilities don't measure up to pros, and yet create amazingly compelling pieces.
All I'm saying is: you've got some amazing stories in you. I shudder (the *good* type of shudder) to think what you would create if you had the ability to create your own images to fuel your stories. I'm sure some artists would love to help you illustrate your stories if you never were satisfied with your own abilities.
And glad to see you've taken to reddit for visibility. That's a good start!
@Tom Quichotte
ReplyDeleteActually, you'll be pleased to know that I have a background in commercial art --I went to several years of school for it-- and have done quite a bit of paid, published pro work in the past, though I'm not a famous "name" artist. None of it has been TG work (nor porn), mind you, and I haven't done private commissions for anyone... but I do have some skills.
I'm reluctant to actually post hand-drawn stuff, however, since my style is pretty much like my signature, and I prefer to keep this kink/obsession strictly on the anonymous side. Not that I think it would ruin my life, but I think it would (potentially) be needlessly awkward with people who know me in real life.
That being said, my artistic skill-set aids greatly in my ability to tweak and pose digital models, as well as visual storytelling, lighting and composition. In the past, I've used my skills to create a full set of morphing MtF avatar shapes in Second Life, for instance.
If I can fully figure out Daz 3D, MakeHuman and/or Blender (right now, I'm merely dabbling with them), and can upgrade to a decent desktop that can handle the subsequent rendering load (attempts at full renders crash my aging laptop, here's all I can currently render with it)... and if I can shrewdly get or make sets/props/models, without spending hundreds of dollars on pre-made digital content from Daz... what I want to do will, I think, be quite to your liking. :)
Oh, and yes, self-promoting on Reddit (and a couple of other places) has helped a lot. As I write this, "Grope-a-Dope Strategy" has gotten 10,240 views (by far the most popular, to date), 96 people out there have voted in my unabashedly self-serving "Dimorphic Dilemma..." poll (which woman they'd change me into, if they could), and the blog overall has gotten a little over 64,000 views since its debut in September. Thanks, everyone! :)
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